Opheesilu Suhsma Vedi Poorum Aayi Maari
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Ee story azhaicchu thanne ente fb friend inu nanni parayuva. Opheesilu suhsma vedi poorum aayi maari. Sushama ente opheesilu joli cheyyunna penkuttiyaayirunnu. Rosaappoo pole chuvanna chundukalum kusruthi niranja thilangunna kannukalum ulla oru kocchusundari. Avale opheesilulla pala aanungalkkum cheriya nottam undaayirunnu ennathaanu vaasthavam. Avalodulla ishtam mattu palareyum pole njanum manasilu sookshicchu. Ennittum njangalu thammilu pranayatthilu aaya katha churukkipparayaam.
Oru divasam avalude pena njan ezhuthaanu vendi vaangi. Udane thanne athu ente kayyilu ninnu kaanaathe pokukayum cheythu. Avalu pena thirike chodicchu. Kaanaathe poyi ennu njan. Avalude oru koottukaari, viduvaa parayunnathilu midukki, athu kettu otta chodyam: kaanaathe poyo atho sushamaye orkkaanu vendi sookshicchu vacchirikkukayaano? Njan maathramalla, avalum chammippoyi ennu paranjaalu mathiyallo. Pittennu thanne njan avalkku puthiya pena vaangikkodutthu. Aa sambhavatthodeyaanu njangalu thammilu adukkunnathu. Aduppam koodi koodi… anganeyangane… oru divasam njan avalodu kaaryam thurannu parayunnu. Ninte poorum koodiyum nakkaan aanu enikku ishtam ennu kaaryam njan avalodu engane parayum. Kettittum aalude mukhatthu kaaryamaaya bhaavabhedamonnumilla ithenthaappaa ingane ennu njan anthicchu nilkkumbol athaa varunnu, enne tharapattacchu kalanja prathikaranam: enikkariyaamaayirunnu ishtamaanennu… ippozhenkilum ithonnu paranjallo, bhaagyam!
Innu sushamayum njanum pranayikalalla. Suhrutthukkalu maathram. Randu perkkum mattu nivrutthiyillaattha oru saahacharyam undaayappol njangalu eduttha oru theerumaanam aayirunnu athu. Aa theerumaanatthilu ippolu njangalkku pashchaatthaapam illa; ennu maathramalla, angane cheythillaayirunnenkilu oru pakshe pashchaatthaapikkendi varukayum cheythene. Sushama ennathu avalude yathaarththa peru alla ennu ippolu ningalu oohicchu kaanumallo. Njangalude aadyatthe lymgika anubhavatthinu munkayyedutthathu sushama aayirunnu. Avalude anumathiyodu koodi aa sambhavam njan ningalumaayi pankuvekkatte. Athu oru onakkaalatthu, ingane aayirunnu…
Njangalude opheesile onaaghosha paripaadikalu nadakkukayaanu. Pookkalamorukkaanulla thirakkukalilu muzhuki odinadakkukayaayirunnu njanum sushamayum. Enthino thirakkittu paayunnathinidayilu aaro shabdam thaazhtthi shu… shu… ennu viliccho? Shabdam kettathaayi thonniya idatthekku njan nokki. Sushama! Avalu jitthu, ingu varoo oru joli undu ennu paranju.
Njan vere oru kaaryatthinu pokukayaa, enthaa maattar?
Athokke pinneyaakaam, ippam ingu varunnundo?
Kevalam oru pennaaya neeyo? Ennodo? Aajnjaapikkaaraayo? Enkilu anusaricchittu thanne mattu kaaryam! Njan sushamayude oppam chennu. Avalude kayyyilu oru kee undaayirunnu. Athupayogicchu avalu treyiningu roominte vaathilu thurannu. Opheesile oru cheriya idanaazhiyude vashatthaayi pettennu aarudeyum kannilpetaattha vidhatthilu sthithi cheythirunna, pothuve upayogikkappetaarillaattha onnaayirunnu aa room.
Njangalu athinakatthekku kayariyathum avalu muri ullilu ninnum pootti. Ennittu enne kettippunarnnu chundukalilu umma vacchu. Njangalu aalimganabaddharaayi chumbanatthilalinju parisarangalu marannu ere neram angane ninnu. Ithinidayilu eppozho ente kaykalu avalude sthanangale thazhukaanu thudangiyirunnu. Avalu chumbanam verpedutthi pettennu vasthrangalu azhikkaanu thudangi. Njanum angane thanne cheythu. Ethaanum nimishangalkkakam sushamayum jitthuvum piranna veshatthilu oraalu matteyaalinte munnilu ninnu.
Njangalu parasparam ethaanum chuvadukalu akannu ninnu aa aadyanagnadarshanam kothitheere aasvadicchu. Pakshe njangalude pakkalu adhikam samayam undaayirunnilla. Avalu phlorilu malarnnu kidannu oru kay neetti enne avalilekku kshanicchu. Avalude methekku njan kidannu. Ente chundukalu avalude koompiya kanpolakalude melu pathinju. Avalude kavilukalilu, chundukalilu… avalude kazhutthilu, avalude bhamgiyaarnna kocchu mulakalilu, ava poompaattayaayi rasam nukarnnu. Avalu ikkili kondu pulayukayaayirunnu. Aa paadalavarnnamaarnna mulakkannukalilu, avayilu ezhunnu ninna svathe mruduvenkilum rathyuddheepanatthaalu kaduttha mulanjettukalilu, njan naavinthumpu kondu chithravelakalu cheythu. Avalu kunungicchiricchu kondeyirunnu.
Ente aduttha lakshuyam avalude pokkilcchuzhiyaayirunnu. Athu kazhinjitthaavaam avalde poorum pinne chanthiyum. Ningalkk avalde mulakalum poorum nagnamaya dhehahum kaanunnamenkil ee syttil chodikkaam. Njan avarkku kodutthondu. Ippol nammal opheesilu suhsma vedi poorum aayi maari enna kathayilekku kadakkaam.
Avide ninnu thaazhekku… avalude adivayattilu… rathi mandiratthinu melaappu theerkkunna romaraajiyilu… oduvilu, oduvilu, njan ettavum kothikkunna, ente aayiram naavukalu neettunna rathidaahatthine thrupthippedutthaanu ethinaano kazhiyunnathu, aa neeruravayilekku!
Aadyamaayi oru penninte rathipushpam kaanukayaayirunna njan aa kaazhcha sharikkum aasvadikkaanu aagrahicchu. Ethaanum nimisham njan athilekku thanne nokkikkondirunnu. Sushama kaliyaakki: iyaalenthaa praarththikkuvaano? Aa chodyam kettappol thanthurashaasthragranthangalilu prathipaadikkunna yoneepoojayeppatti njan ortthu. Sthreeyoniye aadiparaashakthiyaayi kandu upaasikkunna, bhakthiyudeyum kaamatthinteyum yogatthinteyum bhogatthinteyum nigooddaarththangalu adangunna udaatthamaaya praacheena anushdtaanam.
Aa poojaavidhiyude ormmayilu pakuthi kaliyaayi njan avalude yoniye thozhuthu. Chiricchu kondu avalu kay uyartthi anugrahamudra kaatti. Njan melle aa manmathakudeeratthilekku mukham aduppicchu. Matthupidippikkunna rathigandham athilu ninnuyarnnu. Avalude yoniyilekku mukham amartthi njan deerghamaayi uchchhvasicchu. Aa gandham enne keezhadakki. Yoneedalangalkkidayilu naavu kadatthi avalude rasangalu njan nakkiyedutthu. Avalude kaytthalangalu ente shirasilu thazhukaanu thudangi. Avalude krusariye naavu kondum avalude yoniye viralukalu kondum paricharicchu njan sushamaye randu thavana rathimoorchchhayiletthicchu.
Sushama ente limgam avalude vaayilu edutthu. Ente vrushanangale avalude kaykalaalu thaalolicchu kondu avalu thante shirasu uyartthukayum thaazhtthukayum cheythukondirunnu. Avalkku appol lolipoppu nunayunna kocchukuttiyude bhaavamaayirunnu ennu enikku thonni. Aa avayavatthinte oro inchum aasvadicchu, kothiyode avalu athine oompunnathilu muzhuki. Ente svantham rathimoorchchha adutthu varunnathaayi njan arinju. Ente shareeratthinte prathikaranangalilu ninnum avalkkum athu manasilaayi. Avalude vegam koodikkoodi vannu. Ente ullilu njan ithuvare arinjittillaattha oru pralayatthinte druthathaalam muruki… athinte paaramyatthilu njan ellaam marannu ente udalinte anychchhikaprathikaranangalkku keezhadangi. Harshonmaadatthinte alakalkku meethe alakaladicchuyarnnu enne etho ariyaavaanatthilu kaattinte kaykalilppetta thoovalaakki paaricchu. Appol njaanariyaathe ennilu ninnum udgamiccha oru dhaara sushamayude kandtanaalatthiloode thaazhekkirangukayaayirunnu. Rathiharshatthinte thirakaladangi. Njan ente shareeratthilekku thiricchu vannu. Samthrupthiyudethaaya oru mandasmitham njan avaludeyum avalu enteyum mukhatthu kandu. Parasparam punarnnum chumbicchum njangalu ethaanum nimishangalu koodi chelavazhicchu. Ennittu njangalu ezhunnettu vasthrangalu dharicchu. Puratthirangi vaathilu poottiyittu thirinjathum njangalu njet&##3359;I — munnilu jeri sebaasttuyanu! Kampaniyude maanejaru! Njangalu iruvarum mukhatthodu mukham nokki. Akatthu enthu cheyyukayaayirunnu ennu chodicchaalu enthu parayum?
Njangalu pratheekshicchathu thanne sambhavicchu.
Enthaa ithintullil? — jeri.
Kure phlavezhsu ithinakatthaa vecchirunnathu. Athu edutthittu akatthe lyttu ophu cheythirunnilla. Athinu vannathaa. — njan appol thonniya oru nuna thatti vittu.
Oke… — athum paranju jeri koridorilu ninnirangi nadannu poyi. Bhaagyam! Ayaalu vere entho kaaryatthinu pokunna vazhi kandappol veruthe chodicchenne undaayirunnulloo. Njangalu parasparam nokki, deerghanishvaasam vittukondu chiricchu… Opheesilu suhsma vedi poorum aayi maari enna ee kadha ivide poornamaavunnu.
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